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Chapter 5: In the Realm of Flies
Telaya & Dioman
A Tale of Hope during the War Of Mel
Chapter Five as PDF file
Chapter Five as single JPG image
Telaya & Dioman 
It’s a small detail, but I like the tribes’ upturned cleft noses.
The sparkling space(?) imagery is really powerful, as well as the lightning at the bottom of the page.